Deadstar Episode IX

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1. PBoos

   23 September 2014 at 18:20

   I like the animations, its top quality,

   There is though one thing, that is the “flow” of events, and silent spaces; if you see an action movie from Hollywood or Disney, its almost constant action, with a few short relax moments. Deadstar reminds me a bit of older cartoons in that sense, less constant action. And sure it add to the surrealism of the future story to have slow development. In story line telling, in general speaking slow does drive attention of listeners, but its less exciting to here, and boy you have a great story to tell. There are several moments i think a bit more ‘or constant?’ speed could be used there.

   On the other hand as for episodes its pleasing to see; but I wonder if combined you might get a movie that ‘could’ become a bit too slow to watch, you can animate, you can create great stories, so i think your allowed to make it more exciting by playing it a bit faster, …its more work perhaps then but maybe fill missing time with some “near” stills of the things, facial views, views outside space station or other views etc, There a story development can be a bit explained, more like when a cameraman tries to capture a person thinking, putting the camera on a cofee cup or window or so while speaking overloud speaking and keeping the film roll.

   There is nothing wrong however with your animation skills, the story itself is great too, camera shots are ok, the cartoon effects are awesome, its all together a serious master peace what you make, i wish i could understand how you do it all in such “short” time, your very productive too :).

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   1. sergusster

      23 September 2014 at 23:59

      “I like the animations, its top quality”

      I can’t tell if it is a sarcasm or not :))

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      1. Brandon Wright

         24 September 2014 at 04:20

         Thank you Pboos! Whether it’s sarcastic or not haha

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      2. PBoos

         3 October 2014 at 13:23

         its not sarcasm i try to give some feedback if he plans for a 1 hour movie or so

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