Comments on: Commercial for the NewEgg Website

By: Tom

Tom — Wed, 02 Jul 2008 17:23:27 +0000

Nice.

By: Eddie

Eddie — Thu, 22 May 2008 00:24:54 +0000

Very pro lookin, as an expectator watching a comercial. As a blenderer some visuals need a bit of work. But then again your a normal person like the rest of us that just did " A small step for men, a giant leep for Blender". Keep going.

By: Rakunko

Rakunko — Wed, 21 May 2008 18:08:58 +0000

only one thing to say….
NEWEGG IS GOD!!!!
two days from the click to having a sweet sweet ups package to your home…
its awesome…now if i only had some money lol

By: terence

terence — Wed, 21 May 2008 04:26:52 +0000

I thought you made a good effort. Some of the elements look great, but some do look a little rough. Myself, I also prefer more visuals and less talk, but that is just me. My one worry that might make them choose someone else is that you didn't mention their customer support. Several of the others did, which makes me think it may have been an element they wanted in the ad. Good luck with the contest.

By: amdbcg

amdbcg — Wed, 21 May 2008 00:32:09 +0000

Good job on the visuals. However, the audio was lacking a bit - Too much information. (simplify ?)

here's the one that I think looks ready to go - audio was just music & it was simple :
http://www.newegg.com/Product/ShowVideo.aspx?videoDuration=34&videoFileName=a4cf2a7a12b740bfadf81c4028ad81cd&videoFileSize=1188397&title=Ben+Hundley%27s+Newegg+Commercial&di=11

but anyways, good job :) your visuals were just what it needed :)

By: FinSt3v3

FinSt3v3 — Tue, 20 May 2008 18:53:06 +0000

Brief and Simple, conveys the message, liked the graphics, not overdone, at all suits the brand.

Well done

By: Ives

Ives — Tue, 20 May 2008 17:15:38 +0000

Homey;

Way too much narration; too fast -get a rapper & slow down.
Graphics were excellent!

By: Dread Knight

Dread Knight — Tue, 20 May 2008 16:36:51 +0000

I like the add :-)

By: Jeremiah W.

Jeremiah W. — Tue, 20 May 2008 15:20:25 +0000

Sound quality was due to compression. I did not know of NewEggs slogan, otherwise I probaly would have used it since I was having trouble coming up with a good ending as far as dialog. The judging will begin on the 25th I believe (I have not won anything *yet*, I am just a semi-finalist).

I am glad you all like it! :) I had a fun time getting it all together. If my commercial makes first place, it could be aired on cable…which would be really neat since I think it would be the first recorded time that Blender was used in a cable presentation.

By: ArtIsLight

ArtIsLight — Tue, 20 May 2008 15:13:33 +0000

The sound quality was bad, and as you said, the mail truck definitely needed a lot of work. Throwing their slogan in there would have been a good idea, too. (Once you know, you NewEgg.) Overall, good job on the concept and keep going!